Competition-Style Feedback and Scoring (PDF).

This is the exact type of feedback you would get if I judged your screenplay for competition. A score of about 45 or higher is a pretty good bet to make it to semi-finals, which is something you can put on your resume. That represents the top 1% of screenplays submitted to the competition.

Instructional Feedback Sample (PDF)

This is where I really earn my keep, because it's where I can really do my primary job--teaching. After 4-5 pages of analyzing your writing as shown in the script, I add 1-2 pages of recommendations of how you can improve your writing, not just in this script, but in all your scripts.